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Dorothy said in February 18th, 2011 at 1:35 pm

Take those training wheels off sister and get ready for the ride of your life!

Thanks Dorothy!! In the immortal words of Spongebob – I’m ready!! :-)

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Michelle V said in February 18th, 2011 at 4:01 pm

Aww, that’s sweet. And so much better that my youngest who is starting driver’s training next week. EEEEK!!!!!

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Michelle V

Oh boy…driving!! Good luck Michelle!

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J.W. Nicklaus said in February 18th, 2011 at 5:02 pm

I really like the metaphor of training wheels and how it so beautifully correlates to your angst about the manuscript. I , too, believe there comes a point when you can revise it too much, edit the life out of it.

You’ll catch your balance quick enough when you take ‘em off ;^)

Thanks J.W. I agree about editing the life out of something. I think it was Picasso who said, “I don’t finish paintings, I abandon them.” I think that could apply to almost any art form!

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Donna McDine said in February 18th, 2011 at 8:02 pm

I commend you for stepping back from blogging to concentrate on your writing. Best wishes for your success!

Thanks, Donna!

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Cheryl Malandrinos said in February 19th, 2011 at 1:05 am

Good for you, Vanessa. I had to laugh when you were talking about your daughter. My oldest daughter wouldn’t ride without them, but the youngest was bugging us to take them off for months. I finally relented, and no hospital trips–yet.

Good luck with the contest. Hope you get some great feedback.

Cheryl

Thanks, Cheryl! Whew! Glad to hear there are no hospital trips on your end either. :-)

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DarcKnyt said in February 19th, 2011 at 3:05 pm

Good luck riding without your training wheels, V. R. May only the exhilaration of wind in your face and adrenaline in your veins follow your first flight.

:)

Thanks, Dane!

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Kate Dolan said in February 19th, 2011 at 5:58 pm

Great analogy! I think it is easier if you approach it with the same attitude as your daughter and her bike. Don’t think about the scraped knees. Think about riding fast and free. Once you let this manuscript go, then you can move those training wheels onto another one, and become an even better rider!
Best of luck!

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April said in February 22nd, 2011 at 2:16 pm

What an excellent and insightful post! Great comparison and the best of luck to both you and your daughter – you both will do awesomely!!!!

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--gg said in March 6th, 2011 at 5:27 pm

…sure you could rewrite and revise it another 9 times. To what end? Surely you must be already working on others needing attention. Are you self-pubbing? You need to get it up, running and generating income and attention. Geeish Vr, you’re a writer…is this one book defining your career? Am thinking someday you’ll look back on this daughter occurrence as a tipping point.

It’s time to move on.

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