Comments on: #fridayflash – Believe

By: PJ Kaiser

PJ Kaiser — Thu, 10 Jun 2010 04:15:23 +0000

Verynice – I was thinking aliens at the beginning. I love the ending but it’s too bad they couldn’t sit down and have a conversation. It seems like that would’ve been the only connection that match could make. Cool story!

By: Laurita

Laurita — Wed, 09 Jun 2010 10:40:11 +0000

Beautifully written story. Very touching. I think you pulled the ending off just perfectly.

By: Matt Merritt

Matt Merritt — Tue, 08 Jun 2010 03:59:56 +0000

I was aching for him to come out of the woods, and I was so glad Mitch didn’t take a photo. Very moving. Thanks.

By: Jason Warden

Jason Warden — Mon, 07 Jun 2010 21:30:45 +0000

Very nicely done. I like the simplicity of this one, and a happy ending every once in a while is nice.

By: V.R. Leavitt

V.R. Leavitt — Mon, 07 Jun 2010 13:15:52 +0000

Hey everybody! Thanks for the great comments. This one was a lot of fun to write. Thanks for your great support.

By: Karen Laskowsky

Karen Laskowsky — Sun, 06 Jun 2010 17:50:57 +0000

Wow V! I really like this one. Now Mitch can die happy. I was trying to figure out who the narrator/storyteller was, but I did not guess. Well done!

By: Louise Dragon

Louise Dragon — Sat, 05 Jun 2010 19:22:22 +0000

Written with a unique perspective! I loved it! Bravo!

By: peggy

peggy — Sat, 05 Jun 2010 02:29:48 +0000

At first, I was thinking unicorn. Sasquatch was a better beast to choose.

It must have been fun delving into that perspective.

By: Linda

Linda — Sat, 05 Jun 2010 02:15:18 +0000

Wow, this was such a unique story. From a Sasquatch POV – cool! This one will stick with me for a long time – thanks for sharing. Peace…

By: John Wiswell

John Wiswell — Sat, 05 Jun 2010 01:11:07 +0000

Some of your choices for phrasing are so neat, like “a moon’s time.” I also dig how your special human wasn’t a messiah or super-special guy. He was just Mitch. This was a great filter to put over a person.